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The Covid-19 pandemic has affected businesses greatly in Ghana. Many workers have lost their jobs and many others are thrown in depression.
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According to the COVID-19 Business Tracker Survey conducted by the Ghana Statistical Service (GSS), in collaboration with the United Nations Development Programme (UNDP), and the World Bank, about 770,000 workers (25.7% of the total workforce) had their wages reduced and about 42,000 employees were laid off during the country’s COVID-19 partial lockdown.
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